He proposed that we, as a community, take responsibility for the nation's present turmoil and not place blame solely on a few individuals in power. He argued that we all need to make decisions as a whole community. Decisions have not been made in the past, and procrastination has made things worse. Obama reinstated the need for choices being made in order for the most logical and greater good to result.
The basis for his entire speech was an argument of fact about what kind of state our country is in and the crises of the economy and the war abroad. He evaluated our problems and argued in attempt to convince our nation that, with him as the new leader, we will repair our broken country.
He spoke with rises and falls in his inflection and it was extremely predictable when the crowd was about to go wild for him. Each time, you could pinpoint the sentence that would end in a loud cheer based on the emotion he buried within his words. He chose logical topics that concern us all and did not speak above the heads of his audience; he spoke as one of us. It seemed he was aiming to capture a sense of two-sided empathy between the audience and himself. Even to the end of his speech, he held the audience's emotions and attention until the cheered him off the stage and for who-knows how long after the speech ended.

Nick,
ReplyDeleteThis was a good posting overall. I definitely agree with the entire last paragraph of your posting. You could totally pinpoint the times when the crowd was about the go crazy. I thought that Obama was especially good at using emotional and ethical appeal throughout his speech. It gave me a sense of hope for the future. I also liked how your bolded the types of argument throughout the blog. It really emphasized your point and made it more clear for the reader. Great job.
I think your blog covered the inauguration great. Like Jenna said, your last paragraph summed it all up real nice. I agree with you about the first part of the speech being an argument to explore and define. For me his first part of the speech was unexpected to go from past to present, with a negative and positive ethical appeal, but I think he worded it great. What do you think? Overall great blog.
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